Day 11
M-Tu Apr. 25-26
Some advice about revision
Share “postcards from the past”
Capturing a moment
Homework
➤ Tell me which essay you want to revise
By next class, please decide (at least tentatively) which of your essays you want to revise and submit as your final project.
Message me on WeChat and tell me which essay you think you’ll choose! This is particularly important if you think you might want to revise your character essay — if so, I will get you feedback on it as early as possible to give you more time to work.
As soon as you have a new version of your essay ready, feel free to make an appointment with me to read it. There’s no limit to the number of times we can meet, but note that it’s better not to wait to last minute to make an appointment! The closer we get to the deadline, the greater the chance that I may already be booked up and have to say no.
➤ Write a “postcard from the present”
Write a paragraph 4-6 sentences long that attempts to capture, as vividly as possible, a specific moment between now and next class. Imagine that your intended reader is yourself, ten years from now. What could you put down on paper to vividly transport yourself back into this moment — to make them feel “there”?
Upload this assignment to our SharePoint folder, to the subfolder titled “Postcards from the Present.”
➤ Read “I Remember,” come ready to share observations
Read “I Remember” by Joe Brainard. (This is an excerpt from a book, all of which consists of these “I remember” statements.) Come ready to share some observations about this reading. What do you notice? Pay particular attention to patterns, and to the connections between the fragments—how do they connect? (Do they?)