Day 12
Mon. Mar. 3
English lesson: Telling stories about ourselves
Intro to editing
Share observations on “I Remember” and 《怀乡书》
Write “I Remembers” in class
Homework
➤ English homework: Be prepared to re-tell story about yourself
Each of you are rehearsing a story about yourself that you’d like to be able to tell more vividly in English.
Research some of the most important words involved in telling this story. (For example, for telling a story about gender inequality, “stereotype,” “prejudice,” and “discrimination” might be important words.) See what words they go with (what their “collocations” are) and how they are used, by looking at sample sentences on a dictionary app.
You could also investigate synonyms — for example, if you want to talk about being anger, what are some other words we can use to talk about anger? (For example, resentment, indignation, frustration, etc.)
➤ Work on revising final essay
Write a new draft of your final essay, and make an appointment with me to discuss it.
➤ Write “I Remembers”
Write a lot of “I Remembers.” Try to fill a whole space single-spaced (or two pages double-spaced).
➤ Look more carefully at 《怀乡书》
Notice patterns within each short passage. How does each passage begin? How does it end?
➤ Look at endings
Go back and look at the endings of “The Old House at Home,” “Orange Crush,” “Southern Summers,” “Uncle Pat,” “The Man Who Eats,” and “Mazie.” For each ending, ask yourself: Why do you think the author decided to end this way?